You know your writing needs to stand out.
You want to inspire your readers to take action, change their beliefs, or to buy something.
But how can you attract attention in a sea of blogs?
Try using metaphors.
Metaphors can make your writing more personal, more memorable, and more persuasive.
Sounds good?
Read on…
What is a metaphor?
Metaphors compare two things to explain or to entertain.
Metaphors can compare the known to the unknown; the abstract to the concrete; or dry stuff to fascinating topics.
Metaphors allow you to make the complex simple and the controversial palatable. Conversely, metaphors allow you to create extraordinary meaning out of the seemingly mundane. ~ Brian Clark
Metaphors, similes, and analogies make comparisons in slightly different ways.
- A metaphor states that something is something else without using the word like or as. For instance: Your blog post is a bland dish.
- A simile uses like or as: Your blog post is like a bland dish.
- An analogy makes comparisons at more levels. For instance: How do you avoid bland blog posts no one wants to read? Spice up your writing with metaphors. Metaphors are the secret ingredients that make your readers crave more. They keep your readers reading on.
In the remainder of this post I use metaphors to refer to similes or analogies, too. Feel free to tell me off for this linguistic faux pas in the comment section. 😉
Why do metaphors work?
Metaphors are often said to help explain complex topics. That’s true, but metaphors can do so much more.
Think about this: would you prefer to read a blog post that enhanced or jumpstarted your creativity? Would you prefer to improve or re-ignite your creativity?
Metaphors create vivid images in your reader’s head – making it easier to understand and remember your message.
Imagery – the core of metaphoric language – will surprise, grab, inform, and persuade your [readers] as mere explanation will not. Vivid language will distinguish you from the swarm, will make you heard above the drone, will make you that rare person today: a communicator who gets results. ~ Anne Miller
Metaphors engage the right brain – just like stories. They by-pass rationality and lower defenses to sales pitches. That’s why metaphors can make you more persuasive, and help you win business.
Metaphors work best when they’re simple, unexpected, and concrete:
- Create a quick picture rather than a lengthy story. You lose your reader, if you need to do a lot of explaining.
- Surprise your readers. Present a fresh angle on an old topic.
- Try making your metaphors sensory, so readers can experience your words. When readers can see, feel, smell, taste, or hear something, they’re more likely to engage and remember.
For instance:
Or:
No matter what industry you’re in, no matter what topic you write about, you can find metaphors to make your writing crisp, lively, and persuasive.
How to add personality to your blog with metaphors
You can add an extra dose of personality by focusing your metaphors on one or two topics that are close to your heart.
If you write about web design and you love going to the movies, draw metaphors from movie scenes or stories about the movie industry – like why movies flopped, how movies are pitched, or how they were made.
If you’re an avid football fan, focus on sports metaphors. You can draw plenty of inspiration from sports training, team sports, tactics, or refereeing.
Your choice of metaphors provides a simple way to connect with your readers. For instance: Srinivas Rao often uses surfing metaphors on his blog The Skool of Life. It gives his readers a glimpse of his life; and helps them connect with him.
Developing your metaphors from personal hobbies hints at who you are: whether you like cooking or sports; whether you prefer to go to a rock concert or the theater; whether you prefer action movies or comedies.
There’s another way of employing metaphors to add personality to your blog: Use a personal experience as a theme for a blog post. This is how it works:
- Decide what you want to write about. How are your going to help your readers?
- Think about your personal experiences e.g. with parenting, gardening, dating, sports, pets, or anything else. Is there a personal story you can connect to the topic you’d like to write about?
- If you’re stuck, try browsing your photo albums. Think about the lessons you’ve learned. Who or what inspired your career? Which mistakes have you made? What have you learned when on holiday?
- Once you’ve found one way to associate your personal experience with your topic, you can probably find more.
Imagine you’re a keen cyclist and you’d like to compare blogging and cycling. You’ve realized that the more you blog, the better you get, and it’s the same with cycling. This can form the starting point of your blog post.
Maybe you can also compare bicycle with blog maintenance – like keeping your plug-ins up to date, regularly checking your links are still okay, and emptying your spam folder to keep your blog running smooth. Have you found that the blog posts that take you longest to write are the best? Is it like enjoying the view after cycling uphill?
Don’t do this association exercise while staring at your computer. That may stifle your creativity. Take a piece of paper and scribble down your thoughts, or think about your life lessons while doing the dishes, exercising in the gym, or just after you’ve woken up.
Not sure how to use a metaphor as a theme for your blog post? Check out how content marketing compares to being a tour leader or to cycling.
Remember: Be specific. Make your metaphors as vivid as possible. Appeal to the senses to dazzle your audience.
Common metaphor mistakes
Ready to start wow-ing your readers with metaphors?
Just beware these three deadly mistakes strangling your metaphors and undermining your unique voice:
Metaphoric mistake 1
Metaphoric clichés make your writing stuffy. In his book Why I Write, George Orwell berates lazy writers for the use of stale imagery. His advice:
Never use a metaphor, simile or other figure of speech which you are used to seeing in print. ~ George Orwell
Don’t use clichéd metaphors such as the acid test (ouch), touching base (blllerrrrgh), or the ball is in your court (yuck).
Metaphoric mistake 2
Consider your audience when creating metaphors. Will they understand what you’re talking about? Your metaphor can quickly fall flat if your audience doesn’t understand it. Or sometimes a metaphor simply fails because you’ve not explained it well enough.
Metaphoric mistake 3
Don’t mix up your metaphors, because it’s confusing.
Huh?
Picture your metaphors and you quickly see you’re going wrong.
Dazzle your readers with metaphors
Get your creative juices flowing. Associate freely.
Grab the attention of your readers with vivid comparisons. Surprise them with personally inspired metaphors. Persuade with writing full of imagery.
Above all: Have fun!
Recommended reading on metaphors:
15 metaphor examples: How to paint vibrant pictures
How to create fun metaphors
Try these creative techniques to add pizzazz to your writing
hi.
i can understand a little sadly, but i consistently come back and re-read it all, i’m having a misunderstanding myself to how to use the Persuasive Power of Metaphors i write lyrics and i want to use this as a way it can help me write in my songs. I was wondering would you mind breaking the meaning down a little bit more. you can also reach me back in my email.
For more detailed guidance on metaphors, I recommend “The Tall Lady With the Iceberg” by Anne Miller. It’s focused on using metaphors in sales but it works in other situations, too.
Hi.
I keep coming back to your writing about metaphors. I write and create animated content and I have been inpired by the metaphor series. Metaphors work well in the CG world too. Thanks a bunch.
Yes, sure! I use metaphors in my course videos a lot, too. Those videos aren’t animated but they’re illustrated. The metaphors really help people to remember the message.
Thank you for stopping by!
So, I would like to begin by saying that this lesson is metaphors encyclopedia. By giving such deep insights, this blog ready helped. More power to you
I am glad it was helpful, Twinkle. Happy metaphor writing!
I put my blog on the back burner, because I needed my social media activities to be cooked first
🙂
Dear Professor Henneke,
Topic: Metaphor.
I have been reading this lecture today, as usual, I was very fascinated, and I love it.
This class on the use of metaphors, has thought me how to make use of my personal life experience to illustrate and enhance my topic in my story telling.
Well then, I hope I have been able to pass the message across.
Thank always.
Yours,
…. Paula.
Hey Paula, I’m not a professor. I’m just simply Henneke 🙂
I’m glad you liked this post about metaphors 🙂
I really enjoyed this article.
I love metaphors and use them daily in my work as a Hypnotherapist, Counsellor and Life Coach.
Thank you very much.
James Taylor
I can imagine metaphors work really well in therapy and coaching!
I’m glad you enjoyed this article, James. Thank you for leaving a comment.
Thank you ma’am for taking time to write such beautiful posts. It helps re-invent my writing style.
Happy writing, Akhil!
I would like to say this post was a breath of fresh air but I am afraid that the physical pain of spending ten minutes doubled over laughing myself sick might be too much for me 😉
Laughing yourself sick? I hope you’ve recovered!
Hello, Henneke. I just came across your post and want to thank you for all the kind comments about my book The Tall Lady With the Iceberg (the expanded edition of Metaphorically Selling). Your readers might want to sign up for my free monthly Metaphor Minute newsletter as well (http://annemiller.com/Metaphor_minute_signup.asp) There is an archive they can review as well.
It is a pleasure to find another “Metaphorian!”
Hello, Anne,
I’ve recommended your book (the expanded edition) to many people in recent years. I’m a keen Metaphorian, and feel honored you’ve stopped by my blog!
Ah yes … metaphors are often like mild bolts of lightning to the mind.
Indeed! 🙂
I’ve always enjoyed both the process and outcome of my writing more when I used this approach. I’m happy to learn some of the psychology behind it. I believe that when people think of or picture themselves in their heads they automatically use metaphors. When kids watch movies and imitate their favourite superheroes for instance, they make use of strong mental metaphors. For this reason metaphors may be something of a Trojan horse – a good one though – for getting messages into people’s heads.
thank u so much for helping me, I needed this for my school project and I just wanted to thank you for sharing this information. means a lot and help me a lot
My pleasure! I’m glad to hear you found it useful. Thank you, Kevin.
Thank you, this helped me a lot.
Perhaps you or a reader could help me find an illusive metaphor that contains the ideas of
a) simplicity of use
b) leveraging assets you ALREADY have (yes, I realize ‘leverage’ is a metaphor)
c) systematized – as in ‘step by step
There seem to be plenty of metaphors for ‘easy’ and ‘systematized’ (paint by numbers, recipes, etc) but I cannot find one that ALSO contains the concept of ‘using what you already have’ – which is too appealing an idea to leave out and a key component of my business model.
Any suggestions would be welcomed because this has stumped me for too long.
Imagine you’re a soccer manager, and you’re coaching a youth team. You build your team on the existing skills of the team players, wouldn’t you? You don’t turn someone who has been a keeper for the last three years into a striker. And to improve the team, yoh decide how to improve – you teach them tactics and skills step-by-step.
Sports teams and businesses have lots in common. You can find many more similarities.
what is a great way to improve my metaphors? everyone says by reading. so far its helping. is there any good books on this? any advice? would you recommend writing alot?
I highly recommend the book “The Tall Lady With the Iceberg” by Anne Miller.
Hi Henneke,
Just wanted to say thanks for your great content. Mightily relieved to find someone who writes about copywriting the way I think about it!
BTW, here’s an idea for metaphors: take the number one problem your reader has and list verbs, nouns and idioms around it. Then sprinkle these throughout your piece as your build the case for your solution. For example, I wrote a report about white papers. Readers often find it hard to find unbiased information online. Most of it is too promotional. There’s too much clutter. So I used words and ideas around focus, clarity, clearing the fog, lens etc, to build a case for white papers. Seemed to go down well!
Yep, finding words around a theme is a good idea. The more sensory and unusual the words are, the better this works!
Thank you for stopping by, Simon
Thunderbolt! Struck me just once and I’m still under its spell. But watch your back. For my own retaliatory strike. One of these days I’ll leave you in a daze with my own metamophorical serial-thrillers. Don’t just dive for cover yet. Wait till it’s all over!
Haha! I’m waiting for your metaphors to strike 😉
There is a reason if we Hypnotherapists use metaphors, as you said they drive the concept more easily and interact with the right brain and the Subconscious Mind. As images do.
And why complicate things when they can be done the easy way? 🙂
Exactly!
Great thanks for the post, how is this for a metaphor
“These days something else on my mind. I know I am Blogging like My medical Class.”
Hi Mohammad
I think you probably need to expand on your metaphor. How exactly is blogging like your medical class?
While Blogging I am writing something and thinking something else, same in my medical class hearing something and thinking something else.
To make your metaphor easier to understand for your readers it would be useful if you give specific examples of how what you write and what you think are different. Do you mean you’re hiding the truth?
The more specific your metaphor the better because that helps people visualize and quickly understand what you mean.
NO I meant that I say my readers to be doing everything ideally while I myself some times think of doing things otherway around.
Henneke, When engaging with a potential new client I rob Peter to pay Paul….”A resume without statements of results or accomplishments is like fine dining without wine”. Slightly tortured, but it always seems to get the point across with a hat tip to too many virtual and actual coaches or mentors to list here.
Indeed. Or to use a football (that’s soccer for you?) analogy: like a striker who’s never scored 😉
Oh Henneke will you get outa my head please ! 😉 This topic has languished as a draft post for 2 weeks because of too much client work due at once (not complaining) and now you’ve done it 🙁 … and brilliantly. Gold star gal. *sniff, sniff, feeling too sorry for self to use a metaphor*
I know Anne Miller’s book well and yes it’s a cracker, but her second edition is called (wait for it) Tall Lady with the Iceberg: The Power of Metaphor to Sell, Persuade & Explain Anything to Anyone – in case anyone wants to track it down – it’s worth the effort.
Hey, Di: Enough readers on the web for another post about metaphors. Not enough people have written about this powerful technique.
Come on – write yours and email me a link so I can tweet it for you! 🙂
Tall Lady with the Iceberg? Sounds interesting… And thanks for letting us all know that’s the second edition of Metaphorically Selling. Just checked it out and it looks like it has an extra Appendix with “25 Stories from Metaphorians Like You”. (nice word: metaphorian…)
This is a genuinely interesting and helpful post!
Keep ’em coming.
Thanks, Mike
You’re welcome 🙂
Glad you find it helpful!
Your writing is like a Fabergé egg.
Absolutely perfect.
I keep reading to see if I can cath a mistake somewhere, but I can’t, haha!
Haha. Great metaphor. I’m not sure I’m keen on Fabergé eggs, but I take this as a compliment anyway 🙂
Great blog Henneke. I’d like to think that I at least contributed a little bit to you writing it. 😉
Is that quote from Anne Miller, the Anne Miller of the Creativity Partnership? I have her signed book and am a big fan of hers. Anyway, nice blog, enjoyed reading it.
Yes, you’re absolutely right. Your, Stephen’s and Di’s comments on my tour leader post encouraged me to write this. 🙂 Thank you again!
I’m not sure it’s the same Anne Miller. The book I read (and enjoyed!) is called Metaphorically Selling. It’s about using metaphors in sales presentations, but the principles are applicable to writing, too.