It’s infuriating, isn’t it?
You’ve read a few books on copywriting, and many many blog posts.
Heck, you’ve even followed a copywriting course.
But when you sit down to write your own copy?
You feel like a mumbling ignoramus. You’re unsure where to start. You don’t know what to write. You fidget. You check LinkedIn and Insta. You make another cup of tea. And answer a couple of emails.
But writing that copy?
You’d rather not.
And that’s a polite way to say it, because you feel like screaming, using foul language, and throwing your computer out of the window.
Sound familiar?
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In this blog post, I reveal the 25 copywriting essentials every business owner must know. These 25 rules help you understand what to write and how to write, so your copy becomes more persuasive and you can sell more.
Let’s start with laying a firm foundation …
9 essential rules for persuasive copywriting
- Good copy starts with knowing who your audience is. If you don’t know who you’re writing for, you can’t sneak into people’s minds and address their needs, fears, desires, and secret wishes.
(Shht. Haven’t nailed your audience yet? Here’s a secret link to download a form for creating an ideal reader profile. No opt-in required.)
- Good copy is stolen rather than made up. Don’t swipe copy from your competitors (that’s plagiarism; plus your competitors probably don’t know what they’re doing). Instead, steal copy by listening to clients and prospects.
- Use the same language your buyers use to connect with them. Avoid jargon and complicated words your readers don’t understand.
- Don’t expect your copy to appear magically when you start typing. Apply a solid copywriting process of research, planning, writing, and editing. Good copy is carefully crafted, step by step.
- Start at the end. You can’t write compelling copy if you don’t know the goal of your content. Each paragraph and each sentence should contribute to achieving that goal.
- Have a genuine interest in helping people. Solving real problems is more important than understanding persuasion tricks. Even the highest-paid copywriter can’t write good copy for a product nobody wants.
- Translate each product or service feature into a benefit by asking yourself So what? Why would your reader care about this?
- Apply the inverted pyramid. Put the most important information first.
- Write for scanners and readers. Scanners want to grasp your main story by skimming your headlines, subheads, and bullet points. Readers want to know the finer details.
You’ve listened to your clients, and written your draft copy with their needs and wishes in mind.
But how can you make sure new clients believe you, and trust you, and want to buy from you? How can you nudge them to contact you?
9 ways to boost your persuasiveness and nudge readers to take action
- Persuade with emotion. Back up with facts. Appeal to people’s emotions to seduce them to buy, and help them justify their purchase with logic and facts.
- Engage readers with stories—they’re more riveting than sales pitches.
- Avoid bragging about yourself because it’s a turn off. Boost your trustworthiness with non-sugary testimonials and story-based case studies.
- Take away reader’s objections to buying from you. What’s stopping them from taking the next step?
- Boost your credibility with social proof. Let people know who else has hired you or how many projects you’ve completed. Create a sense of popularity by mentioning your waiting list.
- Appeal to people’s fear of loss. What are people missing by not buying from you?
- Overcome buyer’s procrastination by nudging them to take a decision. Apply the power of scarcity: offer a time-limited promotion, create a limited edition, or have limited availability. Or add a countdown timer to create a sense of urgency.
- Embrace the power of free. Free shipment or a free bonus can have a higher perceived value than a discount.
- Reduce your buyer’s risk with a guarantee. Because it can give people the confidence to buy.
You’ve created an irresistible offer. You’ve nudged readers to make up their mind. You know they’re ready to buy from you.
Your copy is nearly done …
7 Essential editing tricks everyone should know
- Be bossy. Add power to your words and make your call-to-action impeccably clear, so people will press that Buy button, or contact you for a quote.
- Scrap wordiness, avoid clichés, and cut weak phrases. Make sure each sentence and each word contributes to reaching your copy’s goal. Lazy editing slows your readers down, and that increases the risk they might not even reach your call to action.
- Paint vivid pictures. Let readers imagine what it’s like to work with you, because it increases their desire to hire you.<
- Make sure your copy is specific and precise. Specific facts add substance to your arguments while drivel undermines your credibility.
- Avoid superlatives like fastest, simplest, or safest unless you can prove you’re the best.
- Check for common grammar and spelling mistakes. You don’t want to look silly, do you?
- Read your copy aloud and listen to its rhythm. Your readers will notice whether your sentences plod and stumble, or whether your copy skips and whistles.
Having to sell makes us feel queasy
Writing sales copy makes us want to hide.
But you can’t hide.
Only you know who your favorite client is. Only you understand what you’d love to offer them.
You don’t have to employ sleazy sales techniques. You don’t have to trick your readers into buying.
Simply explain which problem you solve. Make a clear offer. And nudge readers to take action.
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Recommended reading on copywriting essentials:
The ‘So What?’ trick for translating features into benefits
Why most copywriting formulas stink
Learn copywriting: a 5-step system to teach yourself copywriting
Bill says
Hi Henneke,
It’s been a while. Were you on a sabbatical?
I look forward to seeing your emails in my inbox and then reading your blogs.
Henneke says
Hi Bill,
A sabbatical would have been good, but I’ve not taken one. Perhaps my emails go into the spam folder or promotional tab? I’m emailing regularly.
Thank you for checking in!
Claudia says
I love getting your emails; I’ve learned so much. Straight to the point. I’m in the process of redoing my website and have seen all kinds of fluff that I no longer can stand. Out with the old, in with the new!
Henneke says
Thank you so much, Claudia. I’m glad you’re enjoying my writing. I hope redoing your website goes well!
Joost says
Great article. You content continues to help me become a stronger writer, step by step. 🙂
I like how you’re able to cut through the fluff and give your readers what they need. This is a rare skill.
Henneke says
Thank you, Joost. Your comment puts a smile on my face. 🙂
Happy writing!
Carlota Ellenberg says
Thank you for these very useful tips!
You rock!
Henneke says
Thank you, Carlota 🙂 Happy copywriting!
Jacob Eriewelo says
Thank you for all you do.
This was really helpful.
Henneke says
Thank you, Jacob. I’m glad it was helpful. 🙂
Emaido says
You always motivate me, simple hacks that i never thought in the contrary. Thanks
Henneke says
Thank you, Emaido. Happy writing!
Melinda says
Henneke, thanks. Precisely why I read your emails. To the point, easy and smart, no fluff.
Henneke says
Thank you so much, Melinda. Happy copywriting!
Roger Parker says
Thank you for providing such a concise and readable distillation of copywriting best practices.
Thanks, also, for the PDF.
I’m constantly amazed at the amount of wisdom you manage to share in such a readabke format!
Roger Parker
Henneke says
Wow. What a lovely comment. Thank you, Roger. I appreciate it 🙂
Joel says
This is wonderful, though I’ve not gone through the whole lot, thanks
Andrew says
Hey Henneke,
Great points made here in this post.
The point “Good copy is stolen rather than made up” is interesting because I’ve constantly heard other copywriters say swipe files. Obviously don’t copy but emulate what they’re doing and HOW they construct it.
Great checklist overall.
– Andrew
Henneke says
Yep, a swipe file can be handy. But as you say, people shouldn’t use their swipe file to copy thoughtlessly, but to understand why and how techniques work and then apply the techniques that suit their own voice.
Tom Southern says
Hi Henneke,
Hmm, I think you’ve got cctv connection to my world. How else would know about those cups of tea? 🙂
It’s all about the soft-sell, isn’t it, really? You’re so right when you describe it as “simply explaining which problem you solve”. Keeping up-to-date with what your target market are talking about (and complaining about) is a great way to find out how to woo them.
One way, I found to get writing (and put that cup of tea on hold) is to read readers comments. I get such ideas there that I’m sometimes having to reign myself in.
Reading out copy is such a help. It’s surprising how words sound different when spoken aloud. This is a sure-fire way to write better copy.
Thanks Henneke.
Henneke says
I’m psychic 😉
And yep, I agree about reader comments. I’ve learned a lot from reading comments, too.
Thank you for stopping by, Tom. Good to see you again 🙂
David says
Love your work. Thanks for sharing. Keep it up!
Henneke says
Thank you, David
Richard Padgett says
Very useful checklist, Henneke.
One of the great benefits of #12 (testimonials and case studies) is that you can learn heaps about your customers from the answers they give – for instance, how they found you, what they were looking for, and what aspect of working with you they found most valuable.
Their answers are a big help with points 1-3 on your checklist (knowing your audience and using their language).
Henneke says
Yep, that’s so true. I’ve changed the copy for my blogging course based on the testimonials I’ve received.
Thank you for adding that point, Richard!
Sonja van Vuren says
Super blog post again, Henneke.
The inverted pyramid makes me think of Dave Trott. He uses that format too. Impact is at the top, communication in the middle and persuasion below. He argues that everyone is focussing on persuasion, as if they already have a big audience they are catering for. Which is a mistake, at least for most small businesses.
First and foremost you have to get attention. Then you have to make sure you hold that attention long enough to communicate what’s relevant for you ánd your potential customers. And, finally, persuade them to let you take care of it.
The video in which he explains all this: https://vimeo.com/57367355
Henneke says
Yes, that sounds good. Persuasion “tricks” only work if you have an audience and capture your audience’s attention first. Get the basics right first.
I’ve read one of Dave Trott’s books and liked it. I’ll have a look at the video later (it’s a bit long for watching tonight!).
Thank you for sharing!
Sonja van Vuren says
I’ve read Predatory Thinking. Dave Trott is an excellent copywriter, who understands why and how you have to cut things back to the essential bone(s). Hope you enjoy the video!
Laurie Stone says
Thank you, Henneke. I loved the ideal reader profile. It was fun to fill out and opened my eyes. My ideal reader is someone like myself. Is that strange and narcissistic?
Henneke says
Nope, that’s quite normal. A lot of people write for someone similar to themselves or to their younger self. It makes it easier to know what your readers are struggling with!
Patricia says
Hi Henneke,
The 7th point of being brutally honest in writing what the reader wants to know rather
than what one would want to sell is an interesting point. I also liked learning about
the inverted pyramid.Anything in scarcity puts more value to it and its power cannot be
overlooked.
Would love to spread your concise checklist. Tweeting it
Thanks,
Patricia
Henneke says
When I write sales copy, I try to imagine having a conversation with my ideal reader. They ask me a question, I answer it, they ask a follow-up question and so on. I find this the easiest way to write sales copy.
Thank you for stopping by and for tweeting, Patricia 🙂
Susanna Perkins says
Excellent, as always. Love the intro – how could someone not continue after reading the first couple of paragraphs? 🙂
Henneke says
Thank you, Susanna 🙂
I love writing opening paragraphs. They’re probably my favorite part of blog posts!
Cathy Goodwin says
Hi Henneke,
These are great tips! Love the way they’re not the same-old, same-old.
I agree with your response to the previous comment. On my first website, MidlifeCareerStrategy.com, I specifically addressed midlife career changers. Surprisingly many people hired me who I wouldn’t call midlife – they were younger!
Love your advice to Be Bossy (I’m still working on that even though I write copy!) and will end up quoting you someday when you say “drivel undermines your credibility.” You could put that one on a tweet-out!
Cathy
Henneke says
That’s interesting – even though your domain name clearly indicated your services were for midlife career changers, younger people clearly still felt you were addressing their needs!
Most of us have to practice being bossy as it doesn’t come natural to us 😉
Thank you for stopping by!
C A Hall says
Hi Henneke,
I really found the ideal reader profile amazing. Would find it fascinating to see your answer to those questions just to see if we who follow you fit that profile. Thanks. So well done.
Best,
C A Hall
Henneke says
That’s the funny thing. Hardly anyone conforms to my ideal reader profile (Sarah, a marketing coach, 36), but still I hear quite often that people feel like I’m writing for them personally, almost as if I’m reading their thoughts. Sometimes people even wonder whether I’m psychic 😉
Vatsala Shukla says
Thanks for the checklist, Henneke. I’ve recently gone back to sharing my stories and can see a marked increase in level of engagement.
Henneke says
Yep, stories work well in blog posts, too.
Thank you for stopping by again, Vatsala 🙂